I am so happy
As i used to shed a tear
For my dear daughter
As she would disappear
She used to make me cry
As the police would pick her up
Drunk from the park
Late at night and in the dark
My work would suffer
As i ended up in tears
Always worried
And living in fear
Now she is an inspiration
The daughter that i love
She is at college
Studying and in love
She has a wonderful boyfriend
We all do adore
He treats her like a queen
Although sometimes
She can be a bit mean
Have you tried more punctuation? Does it improve inspiration?
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed your poetry - thank you.
What did you mean Does it improve inspiration? Thank you for your honesty i am glad you enjoyed it and yes i am aware my punctuation needs work. It is not my strong point.
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